The Dead Of Night Poem by Dismembered Car

The Dead Of Night

Rating: 5.0


In the heat of the night, as I lay in bed,
A sweat on my face, and all over my head,
Theres a knock on the door, and steps on the floor,

As the tall man enters, it radals my being
The gun to my head, an undescribable feeling,
Finger on the trigger, Nothing but a shiver,

The gun fired, the bullets flys,
Into my forehead, just above my eyes,
Then I take my final breath, and drift away to an untimely death

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julie Smith 28 November 2016

You are really good with words!

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Serenity Prayer 07 July 2008

very well written. great job.

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Untitiled and unnamed 30 November 2007

This is good my friend! , a nice write...

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Kerry Phelan 25 November 2007

Wow, just Wow. dont understand what is happening but im sure you know as you wrote it lol good work

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