The Desert Moon Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Desert Moon

Rating: 4.8


The Moon in the desert
Is like a spot of vermilion on
A widow's forehead.
None to stare at it,

None to share with her
None to think of her
Pleasure or pain,
Loss or gain,
She is no one's possession
Any more.

Sunday, May 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: moon,widow,woman
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Sharma Rimi 26 October 2017

None to share with her None to think of her Pleasure or pain, Loss or gain, She is no one's possession Any more. A poem with a deep feeling. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 November 2017

Slowly grasp and climb Stick on my body Blend in with me And be a part of me

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Sanjukta Sahoo 23 May 2016

The Moon in the desert Is like a spot of vermilion on A widow's forehead. None to stare at it, None to share with her None to think of her Pleasure or pain, Loss or gain, She is no one's possession Any more. Nice analogy. Thanks for the poem.10 ma

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 October 2017

Thanks Sanjukta for these nice words.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 22 May 2016

The Moon in the desert Is like a spot of vermilion on A widow's forehead. None to stare at it, None to share with her None to think of her Nicely written about a widow's deserted life. Beautiful imagery of a spot of vermilion on the widowed forehead. 10 marks for it. Thanks for sharing it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 October 2017

Thanks Seema for these nice words.

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Anita Aparajita Das 22 May 2016

None to share with her None to think of her Pleasure or pain, Loss or gain, She is no one's possession Any more. Nicely written about the shocking life of a widow. Beautiful comparison with the moon in the desert. Thanks for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 October 2017

Thanks Neetu dear for these nice inspiring words.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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