The Desert Moon (Haiku) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Desert Moon (Haiku)

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The fading desert moon shines

Like a-spot-of vermilion on a widow's forehead,

Nobody cares nor does stare.

Sunday, May 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,lonely,moon,widow,woman
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
D Priyanka Singh 06 December 2017

Is like a spot of vermilion On a widow's forehead, nobody cares nor stares. Beautiful comparison with fading moon. Both wane, the beauty and charm of a widow and the moon. Thanks for the tiny poem. 10++++ DP

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D Priyanka Singh 06 December 2017

Is like a spot of vermilion On a widow's forehead, nobody cares nor stares. Beautiful comparison with fading moon. Both wane, the beauty and charm of a widow and the moon. Thanks for the tiny poem.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 23 May 2016

The fading desert moon Is like a spot of vermilion On a widow's forehead Beautiful. True. Full Marks for the poem Sir.

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D Priyanka Singh 06 December 2017

I agree solemnly with you dear mam.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 23 May 2016

The fading desert moon Is like a spot of vermilion On a widow's forehead Beautiful comparison with fading moon. Both wane, the beauty and charmth of a widow and the moon. Thanks for the tiny poem. 10 for it.

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D Priyanka Singh 06 December 2017

I agree solemnly with you dear DIDI.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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