Hnt var


The Dying Flower - Poem by Hnt var

There was love in the room.
It was the laughter in the rain.

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Comments about The Dying Flower by Hnt var

  • (10/18/2013 1:28:00 AM)


    Dear Herant, I loved your poem. Short, sweet and skillfully crafted. From the first line itself the poem holds your attention. You have a real talent here, which you can hone still further to become a consummate poet. Wish you all the best for the contest. But you cannot predict anything in an Online Contest like this - which can be easily manipulated by cyber savvy poets! ! (See my poem Poem Hunter Contest Final just to have an idea of how a contest can be manipulated...) (Report) Reply

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  • Ramesh Rai (9/24/2013 8:34:00 AM)


    What a dying flower can express, nicely crafted here. (Report) Reply

  • James Bredin (6/26/2012 8:51:00 PM)


    IF TIME IS NOT YOUR FRIEND THEN DYING WITH DIGNITY MIGHT HELP.
    HEAVY-DUTY THOUGHTS, I KNOW.
    BUT THAT'S LIFE AND DEATH.
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  • Ralph The Elf (6/26/2012 8:04:00 PM)


    wow this is beautiful, nice concept and length, not too much but carries all the emotions it has to
    keep it up
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  • (6/26/2012 7:31:00 PM)


    When I read this poem it reminds me how time will continue even if you don't want it to; how I wish I could escape from the dying flower. It reminds me of how I wish I could change my past and how I can't change the past. I can only live with the decision I've made and the consequences for my actions.
    Thank you for sharing this lovely poem with me
    I look forward to reading more of your work
    -Autumn
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