The Empress Of My Heart Poem by Akachukwu Lekwauwa

The Empress Of My Heart

Rating: 4.8


If I wait by the well of water,
Then I could stand till the end of time.
For we are passed the age
When maidens go out at evening time to draw water,
But I am persuaded by the new millennium,
Rendezvous at big-trendy-crunchy places
With the loft of Kilimanjaro.

Surely, she abhors her man riding on a camel
He is wanted inside the cushion of modern exotics
Her high and pitcherless shoulder
Nothing to lay down to quench my thirsty soul
Yet, her name is Rebecca.
Obscurely I might empty my treasure into her bare hands.

Once a nervous man,
Afraid of trusting himself to the seduction of the moment,
Ashamed of putting forward his pretentions
To an intimacy with the other,
Yesterday is gone.
Only today and forever remains for us,
And to be a coward is no way to success
Neither in poetry, in war nor in love!

In a clime where maidens adorn breastplate,
Requiring the hardest and heaviest hammering to stir,
The blows do not hurt the iron
Instead, the one hammering,
For love it seems a barren time.

In awe I observe her frame,
For she goes bare-breasted,
Unfazed by the quick eyes and quick tongues
Of seeing and roving men,
Not fearing the dart of Adam or Smith.
Exquisitely, exuding warmth and beauty
From her large heart,
To the soothing of the pedantic companion,
And the polished acquaintance,
To the admiration of public view,
And to the shame of Vashti.

So I aim with no air of precaution,
For I am a metrical experimenter,
With fewer blemishes,
Not fearing being caught in a shower of rain.
And in case of any untoward accident,
Not fearing if I be able
To make good my retreat home.

I've flexed a laudable and healthy supremacy
Over my fevered mind,
Not yet could the boldest of mind,
In its toughest hour of manly fortitude,
Endure to be domesticated with such a feeling.
I hereby unbutton my bosom,
For hereafter a new epoch of my life begins.
Perhaps a human signification,
One not unnatural result
Or accompaniment of such an encounter.

Could I ever think of her or see her without trembling?
When she calls out to me
With peculiar tenderness,
Wave-notes of love fall on my ear.
She shakes hands with beauty,
Wearing a pair of fashionable chic,
Live-long, emitting seraphic smiles,
Simplicity remains her ultimate sophistication.

A flicker of hope in need of an angelic nursing,
Will you cup hands of love around them,
As you would around a candle in the wind?
Will you infuse the warmth of your heart,
Into the embers of my soul?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Deep words, cloud by love. Great poem!

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Thanks Enyinwa for reading and commenting

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Ramesh Rai 21 June 2015

Love and war. Deep impression over poetry.

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Thanks Ramesh.

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Queeny Gona 27 May 2015

Many similes are brought in to craft a beautiful muse of love!

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A very powerful perspective my friend!

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Sara Militello 24 July 2016

Beautiful concept this: - Only today and forever remains for us, And to be a coward is no way to success Either in poetry, in war or in love! This poem of yours is so beautiful and contains so many human sentiments, I know I will read it over and over again. A wonderful effort. Thanks for sharing it.... and thanks for your comment on my poem. I don't seem to be able to get back places where comments made on one's own poetry are seen....

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Khairul Ahsan 25 June 2016

Just read this wonderful poem of yours, the first one posted here. The opening line speaks of the mastery you have over expressions- 'If I wait by the well of water, then I could stand till the end of time'.... There are other exceptionally good expressions too: 'Obscurely I might empty my treasure into her bare hands'... 'And to be a coward is no way to success Either in poetry, in war or in love! '... 'When she calls out to me With peculiar tenderness, Wave-notes of love fall on my ear'... A lovely love poem. Deserves 10/10.

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Lopamudra Mishra 16 August 2015

beautiful use of metaphors with a journey from past to present... good ink

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Kirby Wright 18 July 2015

I like her man riding on a camel. But I want the poet to avoid dangerous words like love and heart and soul because they are overused in love/beloved poems. I suggest the poet read some prose about relationships in works by James Joyce. He really hits it with his description of Stephen's attraction to the girl in PORTRAIT. Check it out and keep writing.

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