Emily Sleator aka Katastrophic Kyte3 NopyGirrl

The End....... * iwant u* =[ babey pleeze

Goodbye is wat i should say
But i dont see no 'good' part
Will u desert me?
What am i goin to survive on?
Starving for your love
And yearning for your touch
Please dont let me go
I've been strong this whole time
But im afraid i might break
My insides are about to explode
And be revealed to the world
Im like a bomb ticking
Waiting to go off
I dont wanna show weak
So dont make me
Sometimes the person
Who makes you the strongest
Is your weakness....

Submitted: Friday, February 06, 2009

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  • Rookie Tom Golding (2/8/2009 1:58:00 PM)

    Another great write but it reads as if you expect to fail and depresses me on behalf of the girl. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Keith Hendrickson (2/7/2009 8:54:00 PM)

    ''goodbye is what i should say but i dont see no good part'' great way to catch the readers attention from the start. but top to bottom another great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Evaughn Gray (2/6/2009 11:09:00 PM)

    this poem is very true, it's a very wonderful heart wrenching poem, so much pain you put into this poem, it was utterly beautiful.~Hazel G.E (Report) Reply

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