The End....... * Iwant U* =[ Babey Pleeze Poem by Emily Sleator aka Katastrophic Kyte3 NopyGirrl

The End....... * Iwant U* =[ Babey Pleeze

Rating: 2.9


Goodbye is wat i should say
But i dont see no 'good' part
Will u desert me?
What am i goin to survive on?
Starving for your love
And yearning for your touch
Please dont let me go
I've been strong this whole time
But im afraid i might break
My insides are about to explode
And be revealed to the world
Im like a bomb ticking
Waiting to go off
I dont wanna show weak
So dont make me
Sometimes the person
Who makes you the strongest
Is your weakness....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Golding 08 February 2009

Another great write but it reads as if you expect to fail and depresses me on behalf of the girl.

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Keith Hendrickson 07 February 2009

''goodbye is what i should say but i dont see no good part'' great way to catch the readers attention from the start. but top to bottom another great poem.

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Evaughn Gray 06 February 2009

this poem is very true, it's a very wonderful heart wrenching poem, so much pain you put into this poem, it was utterly beautiful.~Hazel G.E

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