The Engagement Ring Poem by Akhtar Jawad

The Engagement Ring

Rating: 5.0


Oh! black clouds,
Go from here,
I don't want thunders,
I don't want lightning,
I don't want rains,
My beloved is away.
When he left the village,
I was just thirteen,
But I am now sixteen,
And I now understand,
The meaning of the moon,
In my ring finger.

All the girls of village,
Are singing folk songs,
On the swings that are hanging,
In the mango trees,
And behind a large tree,
I am standing all alone,
I feel something,
In my body and soul,
My eyes are wet,
My age I regret,
As I now understand,
The meaning of folk songs.

Being burnt in the fires,
Of my dreams and desires,
I am now aware,
Of the mystery of life,
What I want from you,
What you mean for me,
Why I wait for you,
Why I seek you dear,
Why tears in my eyes,
Why annoyed of skies,
These rains blow the flames,
Of your love, my love!

And the red stone,
Of my golden ring,
Appears to me,
A drop of blood,
That has frozen in a shape,
Of a human heart,
A symbol of a feeling,
And a thought if you,
Were here in the rains,
I and you,
I can't say any more,
But I now understand.

The Engagement Ring
Monday, August 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Feelings of loneliness at age of sweet sixteen.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 25 August 2014

amazing poem in the fullest sense, love the rhythm of pace changes, very good poem.

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Khalida Bano Ali 25 August 2014

A lovely description of a girl engaged in a teen age and silently loving and awaiting her lover and feeling pains without him in the rains.

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Khalid Saifullah 22 March 2017

A touching story nicely penned........................................................

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Farhan Mirza 09 June 2015

This is a amazing.....

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Farhan Mirza 09 June 2015

This poem is beautiful, I loved it, good work.

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Valsa George 30 August 2014

Another lovely poem! And the red stone, Of my golden ring, Appears to me, A drop of blood, That has frozen in a shape, Of a human heart, .................... Beautiful lines! The portrait of a girl standing lonely lost in memories of her lover far away at the sight of her engagement ring, while other girls of her age in a festive mood sing and dance is beautifully painted here!

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Sarmad Mirza 27 August 2014

how beautiful it is Soo lovely

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