The Enslaved Kingdom Poem by Gergana Teofilova

The Enslaved Kingdom



Suffering for ages,
Tormented by lies,
There was once a kingdom careworn,
Cruelly deprived of both its eyes

Underneath a cliff intact,
Deeply hidden in the woods,
A spiny dragon got attacked,
Put to slumber, and for good

All trees surrendered,
All mountains wept,
Sold out by vendors,
Their flesh still crept

The kingdom, envied by the rest
With golden chalices and shiny towers,
Sent knights in armor out in quest,
Of that old pale witch with mighty powers

The monster clenched its teeth that night,
Eradicating future smiles and happy glances,
All human feelings were out of sight,
They obediently left their streets to the one who dances.

Poverty and misery were as cold as ice,
Hunger and misfortune chased them all,
Not being ready to pay the price,
The kingdom was simply doomed to fall

Year after year it was still the same,
The knights had failed to find the witch,
The horrifying monster used many names,
The poor were dying, those who stole were rich

All young people fled away
With no desire to come back again,
The ancient kingdom had been betrayed,
The monster buried it in muddy rain

Friday, May 9, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: fairytale
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 27 May 2017

i was seeking a poem from you to use in my/our June showcase; i'm featuring poems only by females this month. but your poems on PH are 'few' and longer than i want to use. this one tempts me, though it is a bit long. and, though i like the rhyming, i'm not sure i will follow the story well even by more rereading. i've guessed it is symbolic of something political going on in some area of the world today. but it says fairytale and sounds................ooops! i see we both spelled fairy tale as one connected word [fairytale]................ like a fairy tale. but i see: fair·y tale ˈferē tāl/ noun noun: fairytale a children's story about magical and imaginary beings and lands. synonyms: folk tale, folk story, traditional story, myth, legend, fantasy, fable the movie was inspired by a fairy tale denoting something regarded as resembling a fairy story in being magical, idealized, or extremely happy. modifier noun: fairy-tale a fairy-tale romance a fabricated story, especially one intended to deceive. synonyms: lie, white lie, fib, half-truth, untruth, falsehood, tall tale, story, fabrication, invention, fiction; More informalwhopper, cock-and-bull story she accused him of telling fairy tales Translate fairytale to Use over time for: fairytale Please let me know if you would like a poem used in the showcase and, if so, if you have one not much longer than 25 lines. or, with your permission, i would shorten one of yours, noting such in the showcase. bri :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 September 2015

All young people fled away With no desire to come back again, The ancient kingdom had been betrayed, The monster buried it in muddy rain.. An amazing story described in verses. You are such a talented poetess. thank you for inviting to read your poem. tony

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Gergana Teofilova 29 September 2015

thanks!

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Colleen Courtney 09 May 2014

What a great story this piece tells! Well done!

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