The Evening Poem by ADITYA BHADURI

The Evening

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Shadow-water extending up to the horizon
A boat made of light floating;

Who is plying an ore? facing towards the west ?

Far-off verdant valley
Evening is falling
The peasants returning to their village
Crops on their head.
Deprecit moon peeping behind the leaves;

It is she who plyinga an ore;
Her face covered with shadow
But evening- star glimmering on her forehead.

Tuesday, August 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: evening
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
aditya raj rabare 30 August 2016

Nice

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aditya raj rabare 30 August 2016

Nice

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Kelly Kurt 30 August 2016

You have painted a beautiful scene, Aditya. Thank you

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 August 2016

It is she who plyinga an ore; Her face covered with shadow But evening- star glimmering on her forehead. star should glimmer on such faces...... thank you

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Sriranji Aratisankar 30 August 2016

Good description of nature....Thanks for sharing....10 for you...

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