The Eventful Night Poem by Abdul Wahab

The Eventful Night

Rating: 4.4


Driving away
the coldness I wrap

the darkness of the night
and lie flat sweating hot

Under the sky
And I wait to listen the foot steps

Or at least the shooting Star
Whom I can wish

To fulfil my dream
The wind is very soothing

but the light
of the dawn is in a hurry,

The stars shy away
as if they were in battle field

The clouds are very busy
To welcome the sun

I feel rejected
And abandoned

To spread salt over my wounds
Moon shuts the windows

The night pulls
the rope of the curtain

Their game is over
but mine just to begin

What a fate, what a destiny
Cursing them I fall fast in sleep

What a wonder, what a surprise,
Around me I See

Many beautiful queens
And I am their only handsome king

When in ecstasy I shout I cry
I become awake

The fierce morning light tells
me and my eyes

That the queens were not in reality
And I was in dream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yasmin Khan 05 June 2013

A fantasy painted vividly, grim picture precedes and follows the dream.

0 0 Reply
David Wood 05 June 2013

Lovely imagery Abdul, you really painted a picture with words

0 0 Reply
Heather Wilkins 04 June 2013

This was a tremendous dream. You only have need for one queen. I like this very much. It is full of detail and imagery. very nice write

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success