The Fall Poem by Nosheen Irfan

The Fall

Rating: 4.5


My heart's land is strewn with yellow leaves
Fallen from the heights of dreams
The wind whistles through the emptiness
Biting, stinging the faint flesh

I sink and sink into an autumn abyss
Hearing the moans of the trampled leaves
The feet stamp hard on my heart
And trees are shedding, shedding my dreams

Tuesday, January 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,melancholy,mood
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2017

I sink and sink into an autumn abyss Hearing the moans of the trampled leaves The feet stamp hard on my heart And trees are shedding, shedding my dreams..........touching expression with lovely theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 August 2016

Through the emptiness! ! Wirh the muse of nature. Nice work.

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Valsa George 07 February 2016

Withering leaves and withered dreams! How well you have associated your melancholy stricken heart and the fading dreams with the Fall. From the autumn abyss you can fly straight to vernal heights! Very effective images are used in the poem.

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Aarzoo Mehek 28 January 2016

There is spring waiting, let the leaves of pain shed and let the soul cry it's heart...come spring your heart is rejuvenated with new life and new deams. touchy poem.10+++

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M Asim Nehal 26 January 2016

Sad but true, fall yet raised, Life and death..... Amusing poem, indeed....10+++

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Nosheen Irfan

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Lahore, Pakistan
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