The Fate Poem by alex andreev

The Fate

Rating: 4.8


Die you all, my enemies,
all who hate me,
who date to kill,
but only fate
will celebrate
my day of the end.
Ok, it will be late,
too late
to think about my mate
because his pate
like usual plate was smashing…
It was so great,
t’was really great
without dream’s dashing.
But now I grate my teeth
I know it’s life’s crashing…
You think you rate this stuff,
oh yeah, it is ok,
just sate your paunch,
devastate plate,
because you’ll see
when fate
will celebrate!

(in memory of lost father)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mariam Khan 19 July 2009

Beutiful Poem Keep up the good work

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Eyan Desir 20 June 2009

Good write Alex keep writing

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but only fate will celebrate my day of the end........ yes that will belast laugh for fate.... beautiful write

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Afzal Shauq 16 June 2009

its really a good and very much impressive poem in the trbute of your lost father... the idea is good, the way you done is interesting and good lines... well done..10++++

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L. Rigyra Nidro 16 June 2009

very interseting poem, and well written. your strong emotions show through 'but only fate will celebrate my day of the end'

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