The Feeling Of Emptiness Poem by bobby kramer jr.

The Feeling Of Emptiness



Do you ever feel empty
like you have nothing left inside
I wish this feeling would go away
it's to much I just can't hide.
I wish I had the answer
to why I feel this way
every night before I go to sleep
I close my eyes and pray.
I ask god why is all this happening
can you please, shed your light on me
I'm not this person people see me as
if they would just take the time to see.
this emptiness hurts to a point
that I just can't seem to explain
nobody ever pays attention
to understand what I am saying.
this feeling of emptiness
took away my smile
I didn't think I'd lose it yet
atleast, not for a little while.
some days it gets the best of me
and I wish that someone can be there
to help me get through all of this
instead, I just lay in the dark and stare.
hoping that someone will find me
and take this emptiness away
my eyes are so tired from crying
and my days are constantly grey.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonny Rainshine 18 July 2008

We all feel it at times, this emptiness. Nothing likes a vacuum or a void, though, and things always change and often get better. The important thing is that the narrator of this poem has strong, very human feelings and is able to express his longings and sadness. Not everybody can do that, you know.

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