The Final Goodbye Poem by Joseph Cuevas

The Final Goodbye

Rating: 5.0


Why waste time when all you hear,
Is a little whisper in your ear,
Saying I hate you but it's been fun,
I've seen many losers and you're definately one.
Why try when you know that you have lost,
Just give up whatever the cost.
She's saying she hates you.
You have no clue what kinds of things a girl can do,
When she's in your head it's like a zoo,
But all the people are laughing at you.
Pointing and chanting look at the kid,
He can't accept the things she did,
The things she said just balls of lies,
But all he can sense is the way his heart cries.
So finally he waves and says goodbye,
A teardropp coming from his eye,
He knows it's for good but doesn't know why,
That this is his first and final goodbye...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Monique Brokencyde 24 February 2010

I love it the final goodbye... :)

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Rachael Curtis 22 February 2010

This is so beautiful and meaningful! You are very good at putting feelings into words!

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Jake Shelvey 06 February 2010

Really beautiful and well written

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Joseph Cuevas

Joseph Cuevas

Philadelphia, PA
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