The Final Goodbye Poem by darlric john lotik

The Final Goodbye



Torn between sadness and happiness
Don't know what I should do know
Pushing as I can to break her forces
A lifetime dreaming, goes to a flow

Water droplets fall from the sky
Receiving thoughts from God
Leave her, she is not meant for you
Is it sure? Then should I ask you too?

Believing the ghosts of myself
Roaming around the mountains
To reach the peak for insanity
Should I kill myself at this moment?

No rhyme, no time
No room for doom
Freedom for myself? I don't know
I will leave her, I promise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 23 October 2009

Such a poignant piece shared in a fantastic break of rhymes!

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Ying Escalona 23 October 2009

nice piece darlric...but if you kill yourself at this moment....that would be the last murder you make.....better go to a lake, pick a stone and throw it in then watch the ripples dissipate.

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