Jacqueline C Nash

Freshman - 1,302 Points (21.09.1951 / Chase Side, Enfield, England, UK)

The Final Journey


When death embraces us,
tenderly touching our lips to steal our final breath,
surrender willingly to its seduction,
for we must give ourselves completely, heart and soul.
We should not be afraid,
for there is nothing to fear from the inevitability of death.
It is the ultimate adventure
to an unknown destination, where the revelation of the mysteries, comes to all.

Submitted: Friday, August 08, 2014

Topic of this poem: Death


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This is the opening poem of a book I have written called The Final Journey. It is a ghost story and as yet is unpublished.

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  • Veteran Poet - 3,042 Points Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi (8/20/2014 2:08:00 PM)

    I wish to be wise and brave when my time comes. I crave or death many a times thinking it to be an answer to all my troubles but the real feelings must be similar to the ones depicted here. So beautiful and so easy to understand. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,222 Points David Harris (8/20/2014 3:58:00 AM)

    Great writing. This is a complete contradiction to Dylan Thomas' words: - rage, rage against the dying of the light. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,050 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/12/2014 5:39:00 AM)

    Loved this poem. It's beautiful!
    I wish death's seductions were truly as soft and smooth as you've said, and the transformation as natural.
    Thanks, dear poet, for the courage your poem has provided me with. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/8/2014 6:47:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Jacqueline. I loved the way you portrayed the final journey...
    Very true said....It is the ultimate adventure.
    One must never be afraid of death...Embrace it with both hands...Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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