Catrina Heart


The Firing Avalance - Poem by Catrina Heart

couldn't conquer I
perhaps
eyes were set to fire
iron heart revitalized
to breathe again
after
the firing avalanche



11th of December,2009


Comments about The Firing Avalance by Catrina Heart

  • Rookie - 149 Points Kranthi Pothineni (12/11/2009 11:48:00 AM)

    Very nicely composed short poem. Lovely. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Dinesh Mukherji (12/11/2009 6:05:00 AM)

    fantastic catrina, an avalanche fired and perfect write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Gall (12/11/2009 5:25:00 AM)

    short but really good 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (12/11/2009 3:13:00 AM)

    You show full control over your work.....
    You're great.... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,989 Points Ramesh T A (12/11/2009 1:33:00 AM)

    Rage of human enmity excels even fire and iron strength sometimes! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 11, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 17, 2009


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