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THE FIRST FIRST TIME WE MET(JAB JAB WE MET)

First time I saw you,
Just you I gazed -
Those alluring eyes,
Your vibrant voice,
Husky-mesmerized.

The first time I engaged
Conversation you, in short slips,
Smiling- fascinated,
sweet nothings passing our lips,
smitten—boyish charm of yours,
hiding beneath sunglasses.

The first time, heard I those heartbeats,
Knew they beat for me,
Lay I in your arms,
You asked me what,
I answered in ‘raptures’,
Felt depth of security.


The first time, you entered my world,
Amazed was I-the thought that,
If you would disappear from my life,
How then, live life, without you.

The first time your soul I glimpsed,
Couldn’t even blink,
The very thought of chains that fasten,
The rectangle of love.

The first time, you embraced,
Made me only ask,
For more,
of your gentle touch.
The first time you kissed,
Like heaven-
Whispered in my ears,
“I love you”,
Was like a song, to be heard again and again.

The first time, told you of my dreams,
Surprised me by saying -
They were yours too.
Locked in your kiss,
Heavens opened for us,
And the keys to that lock were
In guardian angel’s hands.

Some of my cherished
FIRSTS to pass,
AND MANY MORE,
FOREVER TO LAST.

JAB JAB WE MET
FIRST FIRST TIME WE MET

ANJALI
1-11-2008

Submitted: Saturday, November 01, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, July 01, 2009


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  • Ken E Hall (9/12/2011 4:15:00 AM)

    What a luvli start after seeing your Beau and I bet its for keeps...long live true love
    Blessed from above...regards ++++10

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  • Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee (2/25/2010 11:14:00 AM)

    Love at first sight so poetically rendered... thrilling and ever romantic...Anyone who loves the speaker is lucky to have so deep love from her

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  • Nikunj Sharma (7/16/2009 3:13:00 AM)

    this haiku says it all

    I love it
    is all i would say to you
    it is true

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  • Scott Austin (7/1/2009 2:15:00 AM)

    These words are a depiction of first love and when we first meet….I can truly understand these feelings. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. May peace and joy fill your heart each and every day.

    Scott

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  • Alen Alexander (6/1/2009 12:41:00 PM)

    hehe,
    like the title =P jab we met! !
    and yeah this piece is awesome!

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (5/7/2009 12:13:00 PM)

    Prothom ovishar, excellent. May I quote Nazrul?
    'Prothom Pronoy Aager Moto Alta Ronge
    Rangae De Choron O Moor Temni Dhonge'

    Love and nice,10.

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  • Vinod Ak (4/4/2009 7:11:00 AM)

    'The passion and feelings
    Of the First Love and Kiss
    The emotions, so intense
    The sweet memories of these
    Will never ever cease!
    In words, to express in such finesse,
    Indeed, require great expertise
    Expect this from whom else,
    Only from Anjali, the poetry Godess! '

    10+++++++++++++++++++

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  • Muhammad Ali (3/25/2009 9:51:00 AM)

    Ohh
    waqt yahin larkhara kay gir jaye

    I think it is the first chapter of Jab Jab We Met that first we met
    Tell us the story till now Anjali! ! !
    Good work
    10

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  • Mahfooz Ali (2/22/2009 2:16:00 PM)

    Mujhe yaad bhi nahi? Hum kab mile they?


    Achcha tumhe nahi lagta ki main tumhe bahut pareshan karta hoon? How can U bear me and my badmaashi....? Dis is a question? Chalo........ mera aaj ka quota complete ho gaya pareshan karne ka...... now, God knows..... when I will get tym to pester u.....

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  • Vaibhav Pandey (2/7/2009 7:04:00 AM)

    lovely poem anjali ji, you surely know how to mesmerise your readers......what consistency! ! !

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