# # The First In This Site Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# # The First In This Site

Rating: 5.0


so many
so....so...a many
rang your bell
tapped your door
you din't show up
alarmed
when they finally broke in
alarmed too
to find nothing there
just a barren page
may be the best poetry
or your best

[don't give a knock [a hit] to confirm]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 19 June 2009

fascinating Samanyan do not know what to say

0 0 Reply
Ashraful Musaddeq 19 June 2009

Interesting 10

0 0 Reply
Rakesh Bedi 20 June 2009

Blank pages are looked for by the poets to.......! Yes? !

0 0 Reply
Ency Bearis 20 June 2009

interesting thoughts...10

0 0 Reply
Sandra Martyres 21 June 2009

A neat satirical piece Samanyan..10

0 0 Reply
Meggie Gultiano 30 June 2009

this is the best write that i have read today..I saw this in a blank white sheet..The greatest point i saw was in a small dot..Lovely write, of course. Hugs, Meggie

0 0 Reply
~ Jon London ~ 30 June 2009

Never a blank page when it comes to you Sam....interesting piece bro

0 0 Reply
Raj Arumugam 29 June 2009

the rhythm in this intriguing poem is fantastic!

0 0 Reply
James Mclain 26 June 2009

can not a blank page hold all ever written to bleed it's clean ink aknew..iip

0 0 Reply
Fiona Davidson 26 June 2009

Great write Samanyan...10+++

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success