The First Kiss Poem by ata ata

The First Kiss

Rating: 4.3


The sky falls
in your rosy innocence
to fondle its peachy glow
on my lips' amazement
gently

Thursday, March 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 11 August 2015

Memory of a first kiss, it's rosy innocence and purity taken with another's lips in amazement. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Full of feelings that makes this poem short but significant!

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Khairul Ahsan 14 March 2015

'to fondle its peachy glow on my lips' amazement gently' - Aha!

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