Larisa Rzhepishevska

Rookie - 70 Points (Odessa, Ukraine)

The First Or The Last...? - Poem by Larisa Rzhepishevska

The first or the last,
Slow or fast …?
Does it really matter,
If you are thin or fatter,
A fool or so clever
Or never was a rot,
But love had a lot?
Will anyone care
If this case's rare?
Will anyone cry
If you live or die?
It happens often
When you are in a coffin
They say sweet words.
Now nothing hurts.
You don’t hear,
Though they are near.
You can’t speak,
You can’t throw a brick,
You can’t send them to hell
And say you are at last well.

Larisa Rzhepishevska (Odessa, Ukraine)
The 2nd of April,2014


Comments about The First Or The Last...? by Larisa Rzhepishevska

  • Rookie - 120 Points Matt Mooney (4/10/2014 1:53:00 AM)

    Some bare, basic truths well stated in a nicely crafted poem.10. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 17,732 Points Ramesh Rai (4/9/2014 10:33:00 AM)

    Beautiful write. Love your ink. Thanks for share.Regards. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,732 Points Ramesh Rai (4/9/2014 10:29:00 AM)

    Beautiful write. Love your ink. Thanks for share. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 9, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, April 11, 2014


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