Treasure Island

Chom Chom

(12/05/07 / Kolkata, India)

The first time i met you! (My first love poem)


The first time my eyes saw you,
The first time I saw you smile,
I knew you hear was pure and true,
And your eyes were as blue as the Nile,

Your hands, your hair, your face
All seemed so perfect to me,
You were so full of beauty and grace,
With you I felt so free!

No that time has flown away,
Let me tell you, I loved you from the start,
Even though in your mind I might decay,
Bu you'll hold a special place in my heart!

(Dedicated to no one, i have no friends who are girls, just wrote it in my pass time, so don't jump to conclusions, i am only 13)

Submitted: Friday, July 25, 2008

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  • Sathyanarayana M V S (7/25/2008 11:32:00 AM)

    It is a nice write up for your age. Come on. Keep writing. You have great imagination.
    with blessings,
    sathya narayana (Report) Reply

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