Giorgio A. V.

Freshman - 946 Points (Athens, Greece)

The Fog - Poem by Giorgio A. V.

The horrid warlords siege the fort,
brigades of demons, through the fog
attack the legion and cohort,
the horrid warlords siege the fort; 4
the knight defenders stand athwart
as horses gallop down the bog;
the deathly warlords siege the fort,
brigades of demons through the fog. 8

Form: triolet


Poet's Notes about The Poem

© 03-31-2014, All Rights Reserved
(Triolet - new poem)

Comments about The Fog by Giorgio A. V.

  • Silver Star - 3,522 Points Valerie Dohren (4/9/2014 11:16:00 AM)

    Interesting form - to battle then! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 22,798 Points Valsa George (4/5/2014 7:26:00 AM)

    Reminds one of the medieval warlords who try to lay seige on a fort under some cover, here under the cover of the fog! Through repetition, the effect is enhanced...... Enjoyed.

    So you are my friend too! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 4, 2014



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