- The Fog Poem by Georgios Venetopoulos

- The Fog



The horrid warlords siege the fort,
brigades of demons, through the fog
attack the legion and cohort,
the horrid warlords siege the fort; 4
the knight defenders stand athwart
as horses gallop down the bog;
the deathly warlords siege the fort,
brigades of demons through the fog. 8

Friday, April 4, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: verse
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Valerie Dohren 09 April 2014

Interesting form - to battle then!

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Valsa George 05 April 2014

Reminds one of the medieval warlords who try to lay seige on a fort under some cover, here under the cover of the fog! Through repetition, the effect is enhanced...... Enjoyed. So you are my friend too!

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