The Fog Poem by Brandon McConnell

The Fog

Rating: 5.0


From nowhere it comes
And to nowhere it goes
A good friend is always around

It descends thick on my mind and
Suddenly
Nothing makes sense

Am I here? Am I crazy? Am I even real?

The rules have changed

The world a cloud
Shapes and colors brush past me
Muffled sounds of conversation
It is a blur
I escape inside myself to think
But can't
I am catatonic
My mind is frigid

I wait

All I know is this is it
It is always this is it

I wait

Until it passes

I wait

I am conscious
But comatose

It is the fog

Wednesday, February 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: reality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brandon Mcconnell 24 February 2016

Thanks Paul! I've been dealing with this fog for a while now, so I thought I'd try to put what I'm experiencing into words. I'm glad you liked it!

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Paul Brookes 24 February 2016

Great piece captures the moment the fog that insubstancial thoughts that cannot be captured a mood decends great poem

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