Rachael LoudFingers


The Forgotten - Poem by Rachael LoudFingers

Emotions feelings thoughts are
Uncontrollable
Pierces my body chaotically
Frozen with madness
As red rain moistens my skin
I fight for power
Over my busy mind
Violently Gasps for memories that
Lift me from the ground
Yet I remain buried in the mud
Watching good bones brittle
Leaving the bad exposed
Tempted to destroy that smile
My hands tightly clench to fists
Unexplainable
Is my hatred
As I force my eyes to see good
Still mixed images intertwine
When your presence crosses mine


Comments about The Forgotten by Rachael LoudFingers

  • Rookie Blue Eyes (12/27/2008 9:40:00 PM)

    i love the images they are strong and expressive. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, November 16, 2009


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