Theodora (Theo) Onken

Rookie - 177 Points (Washington State)

The Fury Spent~ Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken


The lake this day- is a broken grey
With no salvation from the sky
The moon- windswept- in the Galaxy kept
A misty reminder of a day gone by;
No destinations forthcoming
No journeys with a Rainbows end
Just winds of madness & their ignorant refrain
A natural disaster with no one to mend? ;
Dizzying attitudes of malice in full control
While the stems and blooms continue to sway
Tree limbs snap- -Mother Nature's slap- -
Nothing to calm a storm- when hate comes out to play;


By, Theodora Onken

April 13,2013

Submitted: Saturday, April 13, 2013
Edited: Friday, October 04, 2013

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Just a write about malice. Again this is not about anyone or anything in particular but is just a write about jealousy, fear and anger...rage, contempt, and the negative sides of personalities;

Comments about this poem (The Fury Spent~ by Theodora (Theo) Onken )

  • Rookie - 177 Points Theodora Onken (4/22/2013 5:13:00 PM)

    Diane, Yes we do need to be reminded of malice; Sometimes, in this world of poetry, we see some being preyed on...even complete reputations wrecked; Once we as poets step over into another poets private life for real, and dirty it, there is no excuse. Unfortunately, i have seen this happen toi much! Thank you for reading and commenting. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,478 Points Diane Hine (4/22/2013 5:12:00 AM)

    Your poem captures the destructive power of malice very well. We need to be reminded. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 177 Points Theodora Onken (4/18/2013 3:32:00 PM)

    Thank you Hari, David and Valerie- you are too kind; Your words are always appreciated by me! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,193 Points Valerie Dohren (4/18/2013 2:50:00 PM)

    Some great metaphors in here - very well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 339 Points David Wood (4/18/2013 1:14:00 PM)

    I agree wirh Harri, a good solid poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,521 Points Neela Nath (4/15/2013 5:24:00 AM)

    Malice is a mental disease, I think. Because, it makes a person mad.Loved the novelty of thought. (Report) Reply

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