.the Gift Poem by Debora Short

.the Gift

Rating: 5.0


Gaze
Into my soul
Gaze
Into my spirit
Gaze
Into my heart
Gaze
Into my world

See
My inner strength
See
My independent essence
See
My wonderful love
See
My beauty that entrances

Feel
The miraculous heart-felt hugs
Feel
The power of emancipation
Feel
The astounding devotion
Feel
The magnificence

Be
Filled in the present
Be
Filled with the Joy
Be
Filled with an interior love
Be
Filled with the gift of life

(Peace Mountain, Tennessee
Friday, December 29,2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 29 December 2006

IMMANCIPATION COMES TO MIND, HERE...PERHAPS, LINCOLN COULD HAVE USED THIS LITTLE PIECE IN LIEU OF THE GETTYSBURGH, WHICH AS WE BOTH KNOW WAS BUT A MERE 2 MIN. SPEECH, ITSELF! GREAT WORK.(QUIZ, QUIZ, QUIZ) HAPPY NEW YEAR! ~ F.J.R. ~

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Original Unknown Girl 29 December 2006

Debora this is a really beautiful poem, almost a declaration of sorts! Well Done, so evocatively put. HG: -) xx

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