The Girl Poem by Kellykel Keller

The Girl



I know this girl, her name was me.Her soul is shattered instead of free.She is in love, but told a lie to her parents, who don't know this guy. They got scared, there was a fight. So many tears were shed that night. When she woke up, she felt so wrong. she cired again her heart was gone. she wants to hold him and hear his voice. To love him is her only choice, He ask for her hand and she said yes. I love you the very best.

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it remonds me of sam he was a boy that always loved me until his mom got in the way

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ah..... i like... keep it up....

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Colin Jeffery 04 September 2008

A very good poem indeed. Brilliant

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Silence Dogood 03 September 2008

great poem your set up is diffrent but it still produces a wondeful read great job

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girls write poems about guys but you only find a few guys writeing about girls this is nice co.oL

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~ Jon London ~ 07 May 2008

Yet, another fine piece...your heart produces bundles of emotion great job! ! best wishes Jon

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