The Girl In My Heart Poem by Mohammad Muzzammil

The Girl In My Heart



Thou art good, has black hair,
Lips're rosy and skin fair,
Confidence resides inside of thee,
In short, you are the source of my glee,
Compassion along with beauty in thee lies,
The gift of love shines always in thy eyes.

O, the people of my time,
How can I pause that is prime?
It encourages me making her bride,
And then this storm will subside.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Farah Ilyas 13 June 2012

so romantic poem, combination of words along with u used archaic words thats made your poem more effective & impressing...nice 1

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Amy Marie 06 June 2012

Very descriptive and romantic :)

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Marieta Maglas 04 June 2012

Wonderful poem, nice portrait, she must be a wonderful girl.M.

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