The Girl Who Could Not Cry Poem by karen banks
The Girl Who Could Not Cry
no emotions, no heart
no sunshine, no dark
no pain, no shy
the girl who cant cry
no thoughts, no feelings
no, magic no healings
dont love, cant cry
just wasting time, and letting time fly by
just to think about the pain
makes u wonder what you've gain
but life lessons and stronger
sometimes you need to cry
to fill the hunger
the girl who could not cry
just sat there to die
heart stoped beating
but there was water in her eye..............
TO BE FINISHED
I can so relate to this poem (read my poem: Numb..) I love this poem so much.. I just wonder if its real or made up.. Cause I noticed some time ago when I had a period of several months were I could not write new poems that I had trouble using mine emotions to write.. And I realised I've became numb.. since then I have much trouble writing.. hope that's not your case..
i think it ends just perfectly like it is. its amazing. really it is, because there IS a girl who cant cry. matter of fact a majority of them. wonderful down to earth poem.
I like it. I personally would get rid of to be finished but I like the tone and theme (:
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/16/2024 6:51:08 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A good poem. I like it. :)