The Girl With Sparkling Eyes Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

The Girl With Sparkling Eyes

Rating: 5.0


I made a mark beside her name,
Just trying to keep score.
If she keeps talking on, I thought,
She'll earn herself some more.

The teacher came into the room
And then they all piped down.
'Alright, ' she said, 'who talked in class? '
'Who thinks that they're a clown.'

I calmly looked around and smiled,
Expecting to get by.
I thought that since I didn't talk,
I didn't have to lie.

But then the teacher locked on me,
Mistaking my wry smile
For being just a clown in class
And laughing all the while.

'Alright, Greenwolfe, you best stand up, '
She said, as I recall.
And then she grabbed her wooden board
And stood so proud and tall.

She motioned me to come up front
And as I slowly came.
I thought I heard a girl speak out,
'Oh, but what a shame.'

I glanced a look, and then I saw
What made my anger flame.
She sure enjoyed this spectacle,
The girl without a name.

Another girl spoke up and said,
'Another bitch who lies.'
I wondered why she cared so much,
The girl with sparkling eyes.

I hadn't seen her sparkling eyes
Before that fateful day.
Perhaps I was too much a boy
To notice anyway.

When I finally took my spot
Before the teacher's board.
I whispered in the teachers ear,
Sincerely I implored.

The teacher stopped to look at me
With ne'er a blinking eye.
Then said, ' Wait here, and I will see
If you have told a lie.'

She briskly walked back to my desk
And looked at my notebook.
Then slowly she came walking back
With a knowing, special look.

She asked me to explain my code,
I said it was a grid.
The others there were mystified
By everything she did.

'Oh yes, ' she said, ' I understand,
And these are for today? '
And I replied they surely were,
'These boxes are in play.'

The teacher said, ' Alright Greenwolfe,
You may take your seat.'
The teacher rose and took her board,
She never was discreet.

About the time I reached my seat
I heard a plaintive wail.
I turned to look and then I saw
The talker in travail.

The teacher had her by the ear,
I only saw her back.
But I knew well what was to come,
And waited for the whack.

I must say that she struggled well
As devils often do.
But as us fellows know for sure,
There's nothing you can do.

Before too long the board prevailed
And justice, then was done.
I guess I can't remember when
I ever had such fun.

But there's one thing I do recall
And now I recognize.
Twas then, that I first came to love
The girl with sparkling eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sam D 19 June 2008

amazing poem! i love it! i dont know how you do it! good job! keep it up =] Sam

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Anjali Sinha 19 June 2008

sorry for my second comment. I read yur poem again and I feel I should give you full 10 points which you rightly deserve regards anju

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Harish K. Thakur 22 June 2008

Green you are at your best in describing the tale in so interesting and musical ways. Its a nice poem rejuvenaing the sweet pulls of the past...

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Ashley Hall 23 June 2008

Absolutely wonderful! I loved how it was written with the feeling of being there. The detail was nicely done. I loved how it included you in the poem also. It made me feel as if i was living that all over again.

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Corina Vitale 17 July 2008

I loved this poem. It made me laugh and I was smiling the entire time I was reading it. I love things that do that.

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Cristy Upshaw 09 June 2009

this was truly awesome. I loved the entire imagery and display of amusement. well done.

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Heather S 27 March 2009

this had my attention right through and is a wonderful poem great write

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Laurie Hill 03 February 2009

Thoroughly enjoyed this tale. Really good write

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Rachel The Hair Guru 30 November 2008

What cute story and poem all wrapped up in one. totally captivating. Couldnt wait to see what happened next. That spry girl with the sparklin eyes. Ahh the frisky ones, you gotta watch out for them. Thank your for the smile your poem gave me.

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Greenwolf! ! You wicked little Devil! ! lol this was great! ! :) wonderful! anchor! ! ! ! ! anchor! !

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