The Heart Of A Lifetime Poem by Aden Orie

The Heart Of A Lifetime

Rating: 3.8


Everyone has a heart
they give us life
they beat in our chests
and are as strong as a knife
can be as weak as a feather
or can soar like a bird
all blood flow can be heard
it can be felt
death will dawn on us
its what were dealt
but no more worries
no more pain
all blood flow stops
not a flowing vein
but life starts again
another beating heart
without all the pain
the cycles of life
but no heart is the same

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evaughn Gray 05 May 2008

this one was really good too..i like them..~Hazel G.E.

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Kelly Martini 05 May 2008

This is a really good poem, I loved it.

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Mindy Brown 05 May 2008

GOOD i like ur view on the circle of life..lol... i just thought of the movie lion king..~SMILE~ GOOD POEM!

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Jerry Hughes 05 May 2008

Aden I really relate to this poem as I'm imminently facing open-heart thoracic surgery...

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Ramesh T A 05 May 2008

I am a heart patient. Your poem is touching to know. Yes, no heart is the same!

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O Anna Niemus 12 January 2009

our physical hearts are not the same but the same our souls remain as they incarnate again to pass new tests until all tests are passed

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Anne Rhitak 12 October 2008

Interesting idea for a poem, but you have written it well.

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Sandra Wiebe 08 May 2008

wow thats a good poem

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Delilah Miller 06 May 2008

Commentary on the heart. Good way to use your observations to write a good poem. But I agrre with Jenny Sar, I like the Ones better

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Jenny Sar 06 May 2008

its good but i like the ones better your a good poet

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