The Hearts! ! Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

The Hearts! !



carving a heart out of a stone,
get beaten up many nights and morns,
a fine heart, in shape: still a stone,
if you go for comfort, it hits you with a bang..

blowing a heart out of a balloon,
really fanciful with colors of dreams,
a soft heart filled with fake air,
if you go for comfort, it will burst

Thursday, November 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 04 December 2016

The contrast between the two hearts speaks. I would go for something in between, but if i would be forced to choose, i think i would choose the balloon. Nice and thought provoking poem.

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