The House Poem by Panos Ambelas

The House

Rating: 4.5


It has four walls
and two windows,
but it's pretty,
even if it's dark.

It has one table
and two chairs.
It looks full,
even it's empty.

It has no floor,
or pretty plates,
but only dust,
painted with blood.

How many people died
and how many pained?
But they builded a beautiful house,
even if it's forgotten.

Something inside me tells me to stay,
to open the windows,
the sun to see it,
May Day to smell.

Thursday, December 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fight,pain,revolution
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 23 December 2015

Interesting poem. I wonder about the blood and the people who died. Was there a war? A home invasion? Burglary gone bad? A poet's note might be a good idea.

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Panos Ambelas 25 December 2015

The blood symbolizes the 4th of May 1886 Haymarket affair in Chicago, which was the start for the international workers day.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 December 2015

'To open the windows' for fresh air! Nice work.

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Panos Ambelas 19 December 2015

Thanks!

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Kelly Kurt 03 December 2015

An interesting style and message. Thanks, Stanos

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Sofia Kioroglou 03 December 2015

Good poem! Greetings from Athens! Welcome to poemhunter.com

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James Joseph 03 December 2015

Good poem. I enjoyed it!

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