The Ignored Child Poem by Akhtar Jawad

The Ignored Child

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You sweet little fairy,
Why are you so angry?
Why don't you speak?
Why your rage on the peak?
Why don't you smile?
You want my mobile!

You flying butterfly,
Why do you cry?
Don't waste these pearls,
Like foolish mad girls,
Don't make noise like a hen,
You want my pen!

You pink rose flower,
At this midnight hour,
You're still awaken,
My room is shaken,
Do you feel ignored?
You want the key board!

You lovely little angel,
After changing your angle,
You opened my kit box,
Like a bull like an ox,
With a hammer's stroke,
Corner table you broke.

You have taken my mobile,
And made it a projectile,
You have taken my pen,
On the wall you've written,
Now get out, I swear,
Thanks God no answer!

You're a sleeping bliss,
Let me have your kiss,
On the bed your piss!
My wife, now I miss!
She has gone somewhere,
Daughter-in-law is here!

The Ignored Child
Sunday, June 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: child
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was busy on my computer and my grand daughter was ignored by me, the consequences I have described.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 22 June 2014

Your cute grand daughter is an angel. I can picturise each description you gave in this beautiful poem. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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V P Mahur 23 June 2014

Dear Bro, different thoughts are cleverly mingled into a poem with soft feelings. Loved reding it. Thanks for your comments on my poem.

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Valsa George 23 June 2014

Very interesting write... So very spontaneous and quite natural emotions, a grandpa feels for a naughty little one! Enjoyed much!

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Ruma Chaudhuri 23 June 2014

Ohhh what a nice poem.. Excellent. Perhaps she is that little cute Chandni? I guess..I really love to read it. Really your poems are so beautiful that one can spend a full day with your poems. I love to read it. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem with everybody.

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Ramesh Rai 23 June 2014

Beautiful fluent and eloquent write sir.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 June 2022

You have taken my mobile, And made it a projectile, You have taken my pen, On the wall you've written, Now get out, I swear, Thanks God no answer! ........liked this stanza.

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Farhan Mirza 09 June 2015

Very interesting & lovely.

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Khalida Bano Ali 01 November 2014

What a lovely poem! Beautiful.................

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Hans Vr 12 July 2014

Good poem with a twist of humor, full of the loveliness of a child. Lovely read

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Amitava Sur 07 July 2014

A lovely elaboration about the sweet little angel about her anger, desire and playful nature which pleases my heart with a soothing comfort..... yhanks for sharing

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