The Immortal Love Poem by ramesh rai

The Immortal Love

Rating: 4.2


To-day, listen a story
a true story of immortal love
which is ever and ever in nature
the love of two species of nature

In the garden of God
once there was a bud
and there was a beetle

Both were different in nature
one was plant and
other was an insect

They both loved each other
the beetle hovered over the bud
and whispered to bud with
so many melodious song

Listening the melody of the beetle
the bud danced with full rhythm
of her life
she also sang in the open sky
only wind and the bettle
could listen her song.

In every morning
the bud embellished with dews
it glitters like the kohinoor
as if she was dressed with kohinoor

The beetle smiled on her beauty
the bud slowly blossomed up her life
and became a beautiful flower
of the garden

Every passer-by gazed at her beauty
her fragrance appeased every guy

One fine morning
The gardener plucked it
And sold it in market
The flower was purchased by a lover
For a gift to his beloved
Though, the both Human
enjoyed the beauty
Of the amazing flower
But did never thought about her past life
Few days later the leaves of the flower withered
And thrown to dustbin, and the beetle died
Hitting his head on the root of the plant
The beetle and the bud are no more
But their love became immortal to all poets
And their song is chanted by every guy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 03 September 2014

Love Stories are scattered every where, we see their beauty and listen to heir song, e.g., Meera Bai's love for Krishna, can we feel the pain that Meera felt after drinking the poison she was forced to!

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Vipins Puthooran 04 January 2012

really I relish reading this fantastic poem! ! ! The story inside this is wonderful! ! ! ! Love is immortal/ Top marks! ! 10

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Neetha Sasidharan 04 January 2012

mindblowing one.. the true story of every flower..

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Sajna Kailas 04 January 2012

wow, what an amazing poem about love. Love is Immortal! how wonderfully you narrated this.It is like a romantic story.lovely narration.I like the way you pictured love is transferring from one pair to another and becoming immortal.loved it! ! ! ! !

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