The Irony Of Despair Poem by Lauren Phillips

The Irony Of Despair

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the silence breaks the noise;
dark and fearful
as shadows consume the light
and the sun that shown with radiance;
bright and guiding
has been swallowed by the night

tears stream from eyes;
sad and lonely
she reaches for the gun
screams are muted for the silence;
long and hopeless
made her decide her life was done

the single bullet in hand;
cold and silver
thinking the choice she's making is right
looking for the second bullet;
hurriedly and desperate
she thinks for a second: she never thought she might...

placing the pistol at her neck;
scared and shaking
soon of her life there would be none
the gun shot breaks the silence;
loud and echoing
with this, out from behind a cloud peeks the sun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bkhj Chen 14 April 2005

Wow, this poem is emotional. The format of the poem aids the intention of the lines very effectively. Great powerful poem. very poetic. Chen

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