The Kiss Poem by Chelce Waldrop

The Kiss

Rating: 4.8


It happened so quickly
the world must have shook
I'd always hoped it would happen
like it does in a storybook
you leaned over slowly
my heart upped it's pace
right at that moment
we were face to face
when your soft lips touched mine
I thought I would melt
your kiss was the sweetest thing
I have ever felt.

By: Chelce Waldrop

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 13 July 2008

If you are just going to post one poem. Do it about a kiss, and write it like this. GW62

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John Knight 09 September 2009

Hi Chelce - It takes two to tango and it takes two to kiss! One is the Giver and the other is the Receiver. A perfect kiss is the most beautiful emotion we can ever feel and as you say 'The sweetest thing'. Their has to be love and there has to be harmony between the giver and the receiever. The 'World does shake' it is a 'Fairy tale' and it is a 'Melting Moment'. Thanks for sharing such an intimate and delicate poem. It has rhythm and it has rhyme - two ingredients of a perfect poem and a perfect kiss. Welcome to the PH Family - you are lovely. Love in Poetry - JOHN. Now I have to score it a MAX!

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Shekhar Joshi 09 September 2009

beautiful poem.......excellently written....... ahhh i loved it.......just loved it...... ;)

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James Nall 20 March 2009

beautiful display of emotions, gave ya a ten! read my Kann Abels Restuarant, for a smile

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Dee Daffodil 15 September 2008

Wow! That was quite I kiss I think! Great job on your first poem! Hugs, Dee

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Tia Maria 14 July 2008

awwww - so special X Lovely poem :)

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