The Last Connection Poem by Ace Of Black Hearts

The Last Connection

Rating: 5.0


The last peice is finally gone.
Memories already forgotten.
I was waiting for the moment.
I was waiting for this day.
It's all okay.
Even as the hands shake.
Gone, gone, gone.
Out of here.
Delivered in such a way.
Diamonds in the chest.
With so many words I confess.
What is happiness if you can never let go.
The show on the road.
I can still see the signs.
And again we are moving on.
The crossroads of a summer of dreams.
A question of seeing the sight of so many bright lights.
Heavens dormant kiss.
Always leaving you wanting more.
Shallow roots unearthed with just a little bit of hard work.
What is motivational if not the experiences of ones life lived.
Take the snapshot, do not move, for we do not want it to get blurry.
Perfection through the crystal glass of a fortune teller.
Oh tell me did you predict this.
Predict this.
A guessing game with the passerby.
Hello and goodbye with one word.
Shalom.
Can you feel my vision of indecision.
Can you touch my darkness in the closet.
Can you just reach beneath the skin and tell me what I'm really feeling.
Is it a tingling, is it the slow cuts of a razorblades.
Any pain described can't meet the criteria of what's in both my heart and mind.

Sunday, March 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: goodbye,leaving,life,loss,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 29 March 2015

Wow! You are the Poetical Wizard of profound intensity! ! This poem creates such a vivid portrayal of indecision, an unknowingness within, mere snapshots of experiences already lived, subliminal feelings and emotions are amazing! ! Your poem grips my heart throughout, stomach muscles tighten, yet leaving my mind wanting to know more. Fantastic poem! ! Thank you, RoseAnn

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