Meggie Gultiano

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(*) THE LAST EMBRACE *

You walked as fast as you could
Bringing with you some food to partake
Life is difficult, you have to make do
With the provisions the nuns have provided
For you and your husband to keep afloat each day

Keeping him company
Dependent, relying upon him
Feeling alone, lonely and neglected
Never the love and affection you expected
For many years your hidden heart embedded


He comfortably provided you
With a home you call your own
Tried working night and day
His illness had to wait, he must save
For rainy days, the future has to stay


In the dimly lit room he slept in peace
Never waking to see the dawn
Holding his hands, so frail and cold
You were alone — again, lonely and neglected

You breathe as deeply as you can
You have the last embrace …






thank you for dropping by and leaving your heart print. I will always treasure it...God bless you


A tribute to Elsa, our caretaker in the convent where i stayed

Meggie Gultiano
Submitted: Sunday, November 16, 2008
Edited: Monday, October 26, 2009


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  • Margaret Beil (12/20/2011 5:54:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem about love, commitment and devotion. Remembrance is sacred.

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  • Jodie Yu (11/9/2011 7:01:00 PM)

    being together but feel lonely is a big shame and real loneliness. the last embrace makes the taste of loneliness last long.. :)

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  • ViPiNS PUTHOORAN (11/8/2011 11:28:00 AM)

    A real poem: well penned with an elegant write! Life is a bond of relationship! This poem is an excellent tribute for that noble person! !
    Top Marks! ! !

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  • Terence George Craddock (8/21/2010 1:56:00 AM)

    So many ways to write (*) THE LAST EMBRACE *
    So many ways to respond to (*) THE LAST EMBRACE *
    sacrifice for others at such noble cost is always inspiring to those who care, to those who appreciate sacrifices made for them. As God has told us, it is better to give than to receive.
    Another way to write (*) THE LAST EMBRACE * for a music lover like Meggie Gultiano is 'Lamp Lit Darkness In shadow Night'
    Beauty given never dies, 'to live in hearts we leave behind is not to die'.

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  • Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (8/3/2010 10:13:00 AM)

    Heartfelt poem, flowing with love. Sad yet revellant to so many. A relationship that will never be forgotton. Beautiful tribute, essence of the write was capturing; D

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  • Chris Jibero (7/31/2010 3:17:00 AM)

    A good tribute to a good person.Keep writing.

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  • Romeo Della Valle (1/10/2010 12:13:00 PM)

    An excellent poem dedicated to someone who well deserve it, well penned, keep it up! 10+++Love and Peace...(The One and Only)

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  • Melanie Johnson (1/6/2010 9:56:00 AM)

    And you say you're not a poet... This is the work of one if I may say so... Your words have a deep meaning and are so heartfelt. Thanks for sharing. =)

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  • Adrian Baltar (1/5/2010 12:43:00 AM)

    that's life......may nag-text!
    it deswerves 10!

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  • Javier Zamorano (12/18/2009 4:47:00 PM)

    The most precious gifts we have are the ones we are able to recognize and embrace. Poem is a true testament to a love-filled heart. Thank you for sharing this inspiring gift.

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