The Last Embrace Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

The Last Embrace

Rating: 5.0


why was'nt it
a sweet embrace
why did it
take you with pain
a cruel welcome is'nt it
to the other part of it
how are you now dad
haven't you met mom yet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naidz Ladia 19 April 2009

owwwwwwwwwwsss....so the child lives alone? ...

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Fiona Davidson 19 April 2009

Sensitive write...such a tender write...10+++

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Catrina Heart 19 April 2009

sting my heart with this piece...what a clever written poem.....Great!

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Sandra Fowler 19 April 2009

The last embrace will never be forgotten. Very poignant. Take care. Kind regards, Sandra

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Ency Bearis 19 April 2009

a touching poem..brief but significant in write...

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Greenwolfe 1962 25 April 2009

Without knowing what you mean by the last embrace, it is impossible to know what this means. Therefore I cannot evaluate it. I am sorry. GW62

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an embrace to last forever! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Louis Rams 20 April 2009

the last embrace is when it has no one to replace. the last embrace is when death is at the door and you will never see this love anymore.

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Ramesh T A 20 April 2009

Welcome with an embrace is rare now!

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Joseph Poewhit 20 April 2009

Has a cold biting under tone to it in meanings

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