! ! ! The Legacy Of The Blue! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! The Legacy Of The Blue! ! !

Rating: 5.0


The legacy of the blue

The same blue as of the sea and the skies
the legacy of love all ruffle in blue divine
eyes rave up by the setting sun over the hill
the dream yet mellows by the twilight slush

wind wanders through the air and the fire
whispers your body with gleams of the moon
delight still laps your desire healing the wounds
passion still drills over the vastness of the void

fragrance of summer’s rain smooches the dust
sultry breeze satiates the thirst of the dry skin
time flows in its own way flecking your sorrows.
new leaf may come with renewed hope of tomorrow

hope never dies abrupt even unanchored
root of the wind when sticking to the desire,
rain may come from the cloud of flames
whisper wakes the deep sleep of the blue
as the summer breeze never tells its sorrow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 12 July 2008

Indeed love is as deep and broad as sea and sky when I read your poem THE LEGACY OF THE BLUE!

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Tsira Goge 12 July 2008

as the summer breeze never tells its sorrow ............................................................. Fine, remarkable poems... 10/// Best wishes, Tsira

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V Ramkissoon 12 July 2008

If i could, i'd happily give you an 11 for all your poetry Dr. :)

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 12 July 2008

new leaf may come with renewed hope of tomorrow........... how true, every day brings new hopes to start everything fresh nice poem with good imagery and metaphors my 10

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Mamta Agarwal 13 July 2008

beautiful imagery and some innovative lines. well composed. thanks.10

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rajagopal haran 22 July 2008

the dance of Nature has been wonderfully pictorised....cool breeze during summer...well done Dr

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Kee Thampi 17 July 2008

it is love of nature and not stoic to real inner love fragrance of summer’s rain smooches the dust sultry breeze satiates the thirst of the dry skin time flows in its own way flecking your sorrows. new leaf may come with renewed hope of tomorrow

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Rani Turton 15 July 2008

Lovely poem, harmonious and yearning. Thank you, Dr Subhendu.

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Anjali Sinha 15 July 2008

Exquisite vocabulary-perfect choice of metaphors and imagery, very innovative style of writing. The Legacy of the Blue--my favourite color--blue is the color that I am dreaming of (a song) transcends all. I love the fragrances of the summers rain----- the sultry breezes------ the rain may come from the cloud of flames----- Great write. Thanks for sharing with us 10+ to you sir regards anju

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Linda Weischedel 14 July 2008

Excellent poem Doc, I truly enjoyed this write for sure. Hugs, Linda

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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