**** The Legend *** Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

**** The Legend ***

Rating: 4.6


From the sofa I saw sweet Muffin
Naked on mirror
So raw of meats
Emits…
Wet market scents
Animal’s magnetism attracts
Desire drips onto guilty floor
Saliva crawls purging the urge
Oh heavenly piece…
Shall I do the squatting?
Scrutinizing the pearl of
Alaskan breed so silken…
Ooooops…there you are
Crystal clear eggs flowing…
I’ve not done anything yet…
Intimacy tells the tale
The legendary flow…
Your authentic love!
I’m amazed!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahmad Shiddiqi 21 October 2008

interesting! keep writing, Sir!

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Carl Harris 21 October 2008

Well, this is an impressively written and expressive poem, Sulaiman, one that almost overwhelms the reader with it's thinly disguised sexual imagination. Still, as poems of this nature go, it is a well written poem that refuses to degenerate into something else other than imagination. Carl.

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Carol Rhodes 21 October 2008

SULAIMAN, DEAR MASTER DESCRIBER OF THE SENUOUS AND NATURAL INSTINCTS TO BOND, YOU STEP AWAY FROM THE ANIMAL LUST AND EMBRACE THE POETRY THAT IS WOMAN, YET YOU MAINTAIN THE BASIC SULTRY UNDERLYING MALE IMPULSES SO BEAUTIFULLY. OKAY, SO WHEN ARE WE GOING TO HAVE THE PRIVILEGE OF READING YOUR SELF HELP BOOK FOR THOSE IN NEED OF FREEING THEIR REPRESSED AND WANTING-TO-STEAM URGES? WHEN DOES YOUR LECTURE AND VIDEO TAPE TOUR BEGIN? YOU'LL BE SOLD OUT IN EVERY CITY. LOTS OF WOMEN IN THE SEATS BUT THERE'LL BE AN EQUAL AMOUNT OF MALES. YOU ARE 'HOT' IN MORE WAYS THAN ONE. EVERYTHING YOU WRITE HAS HEAT AND INFO THAT COMBINE TO ACTIVATE LEARNING AND LONGING AND JEALOUSY! THANKS, CAROL

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John Dohoney 21 October 2008

great stuff Sulaiman the descriptions made me want to wash up I really felt it

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Fiona Davidson 22 October 2008

Beautifully descriptive words....thank you for this...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 January 2009

The extract from Kayla Nace's comment: Kayla Nace (10/21/2008 5: 18: 00 PM) THAT WAS AMAZING I GIVE IT A 10++ ^.^ ^.^

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Ben Gieske 16 December 2008

I find this a bit overwhelming. Such a powerful appealing to my senses.

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Kite Remedy 08 November 2008

Great works.. You can depict something so simple so beautifully.. Nice, Friends..

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Tsira Goge 01 November 2008

Sulaiman, Remarkably... Beautiful poems...10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Yasser Koor 26 October 2008

Ooooops nice poem i like it it is beautiful legendary I’m amazed!

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