Angelic Warrior


~~the Life I Never Wanted~~ - Poem by Angelic Warrior

I look in the mirror and what do I see?
nothing but the pretty girl I wish I could be
My friends tell me I should be happy about who I am,
but right here, right now I don't think I can.
In a world that's superficial,
girls now artificial.
I don't want to be like that
just because I'm not a size zero doesn't mean I'm fat!
I try my own ways
they mumble and whisper 'Its just a phase.'
I wont were 10 pounds of makeup
my skin is clean and wont breakup.
What ever you say
I'll go my own way
your no friend of mine
if you can't show me your kind.
I'll find a new crowd
where I can be proud
of who I am.
About you...I don't give a damn.

And with that I stroll out of the store for girls who eat as little as possible so that they can fit into the cloths, and onto the street, breathing in crisp fresh air. Walking by a cafe a man with gentle eyes smiles softly at me, I decide to go in. The chiming bells signaling the passage of one life to another.


Comments about ~~the Life I Never Wanted~~ by Angelic Warrior

  • Rookie - 145 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (11/2/2011 9:25:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem my dear. You're special. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/8/2009 9:28:00 PM)

    I look in the mirror and what do I see?
    nothing but the pretty girl I wish I could be
    the mirror will not speak lie and give u inner pictuare too... lovley write dear...

    read mine ' my friend in mirror' i am disgrace and no separate ways...comment (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Erika Lewis (7/3/2009 2:22:00 PM)

    This is a very touching poem. When I read this I was like wow! That's so true about life. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Noel Reasoner (6/19/2009 6:43:00 PM)

    What a heart-felt and honest poem. Great job! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Crystle Jones (6/18/2009 2:51:00 PM)

    again, i completely relate! you have a great out look. its nice to see someone so proud. i vote. hmmmm 10! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! yet again lol (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (6/1/2009 6:28:00 PM)

    a beautiful poem i read..there are many meanings of reflections..yours is very good, , very open and honest..grace (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Fiona Davidson (5/28/2009 3:29:00 PM)

    Excellent writing AW....and bravo for sticking to your guns girl...10+++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 28, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 11, 2009


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