The Life Of The Cheated Poem by Robbie Squires

The Life Of The Cheated



Back in the love of my loved ones arms
Didn’t want me to go didn’t want no harm
But on that fateful day in mid july
She left me down at the river to die
I had been shot 4 times by this man
He didn’t know nothing, didn’t even understand
It wasn’t his wife, she was my girlfriend too
I couldn’t let her go back to that cruel cruel dude
Took her in my arms, was gonna walk away
Was gonna take her in my arms and leave everything that day
But the man he come out, thought he heard some screaming
But all he saw was me and his wife leaving
Pulled out his.45 shot me once in the behind
I dropp down, face full of dirt
Pops me 3 more times, blood all over this earth
He goes inside, knew what hes done
He goes in hiding and throws away his gun
My girl, his wife drags me down to the river
Im still alive, tears roll, cold blood gives me shivers
i ask her why? Why did this happen?
Why didn’t you say that you had a husband?
She didn’t answer me on that fateful day
Just looked in my eyes and turned away
All I can do is die in this river
After that I cant ever forgive her

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 25 November 2009

Well this is life Robbie. Women are always unpredictable. You have described it in a story-like manner. Try to be poetic and it would be better if you write metaphorically. Best Wishes Naseer

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