The Light At The End Poem by Kevin Seales

The Light At The End



No matter how hard
School seems to be
It almost always gets better

Sometimes you have to be
As strong as a tree
That survives the stormy weather

I imagine that science
And maybe even math
Can give you a bit of trouble

But if you don't study
And stay on the right path
Your problems just may double

School is not so easy
I know this is true
Some kids work very very hard

But in the end
You will see that you
Will receive a good report card

So don't be discouraged
You'll get to the end
Life is like a great big funnel

You work your way through
The hard parts and then
You see the light at the end of the tunnel

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cornell Sandifer 17 December 2013

Kevin i like this poem but may i say you have lots of filler words that are not needed that makes the read harder. i love this poem and i will redo it just for myself. to kinda show you what mean. No matter how hard school it seems, always can be better Then strong as a tree, you just have to be, surviving the stormy weather Imagine the math, yes science, is causing trouble Stay the right path or your problems just might double just a little rewording gives this poem a really nice read i like poem

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