The Lines On My Face Poem by Lyn Paul

The Lines On My Face

Rating: 4.9


Every moment... was written down
Every heartache, every sound
Every line was heartfelt pain
Every face showed nothing to gain
Every ache was felt by all
Every one hid behind that wall
Every day showed what was wrong
Every day you came along
Every day made more things right
Every day you gave a fight
Every day you healed your own
Every day you showed you were not alone
For every day you brought so much light
You told others to stand up, stand up and fight
So any day, every day realise the importance of each day
Respect you, respect others then you will find a way
Your way to trust your words and to trust you
Your way to believe that no matter who
WHO you are and what you can be and just how important WE ALL can be
In living, In Life using...... every opportunity



Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

The Lines On My Face
Monday, September 2, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,hope,life,trust,wisdom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 11 September 2013

Lines on our face is our own personal map of laughter, joy, heartache, pain, loss all part of living that stamps us with having survived and enjoyed it all! Beautiful write!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 02 September 2013

beautifully drives in the message - each one of us can touch other lives. so well penned, Lyn.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 September 2013

Beautiful Lines on my Face...I just loved reading it. Some positivity it filled in me.....I just happened to see your poem and I couldn't resist making a comment on it.. I read it at least thrice..Loved it...++++10

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Dinesan Madathil 03 September 2013

Lines on your sweet face have finally been instrumental for these beautiful lines of the poem. A fine experience of reading a true poem indeed it was Lyn Paul!

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Shahzia Batool 04 September 2013

Quite symmetrical, rhythmical and harmonious write, beats are like a balanced galloping sound..very poetic in garb and content both, Lyn... a deep and nice poem! ! !

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Khairul Ahsan 06 November 2013

The poem has an eye catching title, loved it very much. Each line is an evidence of the activities, emotions, pleasures and pains of life that were offered to us, and we must not be ashamed of any of the lines. Each line is a certificate of experience and wisdom, Thanks for the pieces of advice you gave, these are priceless. A word of thanks to Noreen Carden and Hazel Evelyn Durham for sharing their beautiful thoughts and words with us, those are truly wonderful.

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Dee Corpolongo 19 September 2013

Beautiful poem that conveys an all too true message/advice: Live your life~enjoy your life~ and stand tall...even after a fall... loved this one Lyn, thank you for yet some more good advice!

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Noreen Carden 14 September 2013

Hi Lynn great poem whenever i see those women and men on telly who have had plastic surgery i always think how sad that we are ashamed to show our life history written in the lines on our faces well done great read

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Heather Wilkins 13 September 2013

life is precious. each moment a treasure to hold on to. good thoughts

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Sally Plumb Plumb 12 September 2013

Don't waste a minute of life.I realised that once i had retired.

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