! ! ! The Lone Void! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! The Lone Void! ! !

Rating: 5.0


tears yet ruffle faster unrestrained
in the reeks of lone void
may be returning bird breathless
yet not baffled by the storm in the nest

fear shelters in darkness by apprehension
shadow still hides beneath the light post
cry of hunger prongs up into the silhouette
fire when flecks up by the graveyard.

Some questions seemingly unanswered
clouds baffle the truth by deception
painful voices wake tears by the eyes
heart yet resonant by the mystery of love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kris Smith 22 August 2008

Profound and poignant write my friend fine quality of writting thankyou Chris 10

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Thad Wilk 23 August 2008

A capturing and thought provoking write on these - mysteries of love! *10*! ! Best wishes Dr. Kar! ! Friend Thad

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A lone void, so hard to fill. This poem has a slight haunting to it, intrigueing with thread of mystery. Wonderful poetry.; D

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 04 September 2008

Yes love....is a mystery Subhendu...one that is hard to write of...or even to understand! Another Great short...piece of poetry that says so much. Take care of U and may there Always be ink in your Pen, smile. Shelley!

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Chitra - 01 September 2008

lots of profound in here, definitely will fill the void within, and help to seek answers within

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premji premji 24 August 2008

in void everything exists and in you the whole poetry...

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Anjali Sinha 23 August 2008

Yes the mystery of love is unfounded. ---in the reeks of the lone void---lots of depth in this poem. great write Dr. Kar. Keep sharing --I like it. ++++++++++++++++++10 regards anjali

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Dr subhendu kar

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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