The Lonely Train On The Lonely Track With 24 Coaches Painted Black Poem by Harindhar Reddy

The Lonely Train On The Lonely Track With 24 Coaches Painted Black

Rating: 4.8


Among the brambles of a shattered heart lies my soul in crags,
Among the shambles of life torn apart lies my spirit in rags;
Tears streaming down my face as snakes crawl on my body lifeless
Leaving amigos and flamingos away at the home, oh life pointless.
Ticktock! All I can hear is the ticking of the clock, yackety-yak!
The lonely train on the lonely track with 24 coaches painted black.

I climbed onto the gravel bed in the rain, lo lonely brain tames!
By the dawn from the ocean to every lane, it climbs, dookie salad!
In the noon from flat places to heaven and hell, A pensive ballad;
At dusk, in open air of beach I loitered singing rhyme ugly James.
Ticktock! All I can hear is ticking of the clock - yackety-yak!
The lonely train on the lonely track with 24 coaches painted black.

Hardy-har-har! Hold a pebble, a feather or a leaf in your hand
It will say I am lonely; I can't ride, I want to hide in the sand;
I'm single; oh my gosh! I'm sitting between my brother the mountain
My sister the sea - together threesome we live among soulless men.
Ticktock! All I can hear is the ticking of the clock, yackety-yak!
The lonely train on the lonely track with 24 coaches painted black.

I'm an air castle with dreams empty and screams plenty with terror
I don't want to be alone in the dark in a spine-chilling horror.
Then, the moon is a friend for the lonely man as flamingo cheers,
Bingo! Stars in the Galaxy are his companions as nature shares.
Ticktock! All I can hear is ticking of the clock, yackety-yak!
The lone train on the lonely track with 24 coaches painted black.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prakhar Mishra 19 June 2012

it has all to cherish the way u describe the pain etc is simply magical. i love reading ur poems

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank for your cherishing review on the poem πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 09 March 2012

Get out of this 'rickety rock' yackety-yak! tickety tack. You have talents. paint those twelve coaches with color of your choice. Good Luck..

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for a rocking comment on the poem πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 09 March 2012

good poem... with interesting way of describing your soul :) ....

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Nice of you for a nice comment on the poem πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Harindhar Reddy

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Haliya, Hyderabad, India
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