The Lost Soul Poem by Deepti Agarwal

enveloped by heads chained by duties under the strenuous pressure lives like a Zombie.....! ------- true and well painted in words.......this applies to the inferior workers where they work like robots in demand from their superiors...running with time table doing this and that like robots..............10++++++

a soul sould'nt be stranded so....lovely poem

very aptly put the plight of being prisoner to curcumstances.... a good one indeed..

Discomfort of the poet is quite evident in the poem. It seems the cause is, non-acceptance! Well dear, my good wishes! ! !

The strain and the discomfort can be felt reading this. At times things get tough, but when a person has a good will, things change for the better. Best wishes.

surrounded by water stranded by known-- this is life's crux! a good write!

Beautiful poem. But I would react, Disillusioned of parts you found the whole. CP

Good imagery poem with deep meaning. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it

Good write here! you have nicely penned your inner feelings in this poem. felt the desperation embedded...10

You write with great feel for the suject allowing the reader to be interactive with the piece a good writer you are.10 from me